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The narrative order that works for engineers
Start at the first move in "The narrative order that works for engineers" and carry it through to the proof.
Step 1 of 2
The narrative order that works for engineersproblem → aha → mechanism → proof
- 1Lead with the problem. Open on the developer's actual pain - re-explaining the repo, stitching multi-file changes by hand. They have to recognize themselves in the first line.
- 2Land the aha. Show the moment it gets better: the diff appears across the files, already wired up. One vivid before/after beats a capability list.
- 3Then the mechanism. Now explain how it works - context from the codebase, a concrete plan, a reviewable change. By now they want the detail.
- 4Close with proof. A real metric, a recognizable workflow, a named customer. Specifics are the credibility, not the superlatives.
Notice the order. Most marketing leads with the mechanism or the brag; this leads with the reader's problem and earns the mechanism by the time it arrives.